Hi Vikram, enjoyed reading it...right from the begining till the last letter of the story...highly gripping...
I must say, it was something very real and heckneyed....Kudos for great work...
but one thing, i would like to see was to have it a lot bolder and crispier at the end..it was like a story left with no ending...Please continue more and write more about what happened next...
Thanks
Hi Bina,
I must say that it had a grip while i began to read..but somehow couldn convince me with the moral what you have said of "We pay a heavy price sometimes to maintain our looks and figure"..considering the kind of anology you introduced with nightmares and dreams, drawing upon with that, i think you would agree that it is highly traumatic and morbid to spend that one eonic-night iwth all those bad dreams/night mares...same was the case here for the lady...yet, it wasnt an anticipation what had happened to her but what fate had destined for her so un-desired...She paid the price for what she never intend to buy...or infact did so??? probability of having a night mare is very high because we human beings cant do without sleep...but plastic surgery/anaesthesi etc. are something not every indivdual has to go through and feel that un-nerving, traumatic pain...what say????
That was quite nice write-up...Enjoyed reading it...Was eleborate, hillarious n sarcastic
Well Suresh,
ii agree to the fact that it being a pre-election budget, it was a lot customary for FM to come up with all those clever 'moves'. But considering your view point here, an increase in exemption limit in Tax slab system for employees coupled with an anticipated increase (as you quoted) would not only lead to consumption growth of an individual but also result in causing inflation(high levels of liquidity in the market).This would make it uncontrollable (which is a daring task for present govt. to keep it under 4%) and a blowing knock to lower segment of the society.
What budget could have provided was narrow down the rich-poor gap by introducing pro-poor budget like more regulation for NREGA which accounts for only 18% given employment against 100% as stated in rural areas, giving in micro-finance incentives to famers to know what savings/investments/insurances means to them for long term.
I agree to your view points & must say that a critical view is all that is required to make it a people's budget rather than an election-budget.
What do you say???
Really nice...
Touching & lovable....Keep posting!!!
Really nice...
I must say, while reading it, i found it very real & very impersonating..Great work..
Kudos!!!!!
Yes, yashasvi, and the story doesnt end there. There has been a number of suicides amonst army personnal on moral, ethical, & motivation grounds. What needs to be done is introduce transparency in system, provide more amenties/facilities to the soldiers & encoourage more innovative ways to recruit the right talent/unexplored talent into armed forces.
Thanks for your views.
For my Inner soul
Really nice poem...
very eternal...Must have given a good thought before putting it down on paper...
Nice work!!!
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